A couple more Koons

Still playing with the vertical photo across the horizontal layout. Ramon suggested FIG, and I think it's interesting - I'm just not sure if it fits my style... I tried layering outlines over type too - I know it's waaaay rough still, but am I at least going in the right direction??? Also, I think the line between the photo and the type is too rigid, so I'll be working on that too. Now that I'm I'm looking at the layouts next to each other, I think the one with FIG is definitely stronger... I'm liking it. What can I do to improve? Do you agree about the line between headline and image being too rigid?